Pls I would like you to see my essay
Having a good university degree guarantees people a good job
To what extant do you agree
Nowadays many people prefer to have a college degree than a high school one . Having a strong collage sirtificate help people to find a better job because it gives a better education and a financial rewards.
Therefore, physical activities combined with proper diet, education, and awareness, is the most effective method in changing the lifestyle of future generations.
It is the wrong approach. If you wish to give an opinion of both, you must quantify it. Here’s an example “I think that parents are the best teachers for very young children under the age of five but from that age, teachers are better to educate them”. This is an acceptable opinion for IELTS. You MUST avoid changing the essay question into a discussion essay with equal weight on both sides.
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Hi, Liz! Thank you for the well-organized sample. However, I have a question. The point is that my teachers referring to the book called Successful Writing say that it is important to write a short contrary opinion before a conclusion. It is really written in the book (“…You also include a paragraph presenting the opposing viewpoint and reason why you think it is an unconvincing viewpoint…”). What do you think about it? Will it improve an essay or vice versa?
In my school, our teachers taught us to consider both positive and negative aspects of the topic. Not just to write about the aspect you support but also to talk about the other side as counter balance. But in the essay given, it only talks about the supported aspect. Can you please tell me which is the best way of writing an argumentative essay?
Task Response is 25% of your marks. This relates not only to relevant, well developed ideas but also to addressing the task (following instructions). If the instructions only ask for your opinion and half of your essay is about other people’s views, then part of your essay is irrelevant. IELTS essays are short (no more than 300 words usually) and also highly focused. They are so focused that every single sentence should be planned. See my advanced writing task 2 lessons – I’ll be offering a discount starting tomorrow.
I want to ask if I’m allowed to incorporate sayings or proverbs in my essay.
For example: “Obliging children to begin formal education earlier is no different from flogging the proverbial dead horse”.
Or: “As the saying goes: The devil makes work for idle hands”.
İf i wish to write a disagree essay should i write about the solutions to prevent it? one seperate paragraph for each solution ( education , controlling tv , to increase punishments etc)?
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Statistics shows that obesity is on the increase and the pressure could be felt on the healthcare system. In my opinion, i agree that the introduction of more physical education lessons in the school curriculum will go a long way in solving this problem.
So your opinion is that education should be mandatory and education should not be mandatory? This means you have no clear opinion. You must present a clear position in the IELTS opinion essay – you will get a low mark for Task Response if you fail to present and support a clear position. A balanced view does not mean you agree and disagree. It means you present a specific view which is quantified.
my opinion of this essay topic is that physical education is important, but it is also crucial to maintain balanced diet. So combination of physical and diet in the key to weight control.
The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
If then, on the essay, should I write this viewpoint on the introduction, and then in body 1, I write why is it good to have physical education lessons in school, and in body 2, write the importance of diet?
So in the conclusion it will be like, ‘introduction of exercise and physical education sessions in school will benefit people’s weight control, however, the result can be maximized if a well balanced diet is combined’ something like that?