The elements that will be discussed are the possibility of animals being harmed by the public or the zoo’s staff; how captivity can be detrimental to an animal’s health; and why zoos hinder animal preservation...
Animal captivity aids both animals and humans in multiples ways, but the majority of help animal captivity offers is through preservation of animal species, and education benefits that zoos and aquariums represent to man.
Zoos are not considered ecosystems because an ecosystem is defined as a “space in which interactions take place between a community, with all its complex interrelationships, and physical environment” (Enger and Smith 94)....
It is understood that animals can be used for human benefits, but in order to lower the risk of danger for animals and humans, there should be more strict penalties for animal cruelty and have equal animal rights....
This is not the only case where a trainer of ordinary person has been put in harm’s way because what is supposed to be a wild animal is being held in captivity.
In conclusion, based on what has been discussed above, I could restate my view that letting animals live in the natural area will be a great chance for sustaining their species, but our humans should keep looking after and offer immediate help for the animals at the same time.
Nowadays, people could easily realize the wide-scale debate over the issue of whether animals should be kept in zoos or not. Some argue that taking care of the animals in zoo is a better choice; whereas others believe it will destroy animals’ natural abilities. Personally, my clear position in relation to this is that we should allow the animals to live with freedom rather than locking them in the zoo.
Topic: Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, other people think that zoos are useful to protect the rare animals.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
hello LIZ, thanks for giving me the link of page….
anyways….i want to know about 2:1 rule which means that in an argument essay, that is, TO WHAT EXTENT DO U AGREE OR DISAGREE…..we should discuss both sides of the argument….with a structure, intro…1st small body para for the side we are against it…2nd and 3rd body paragraphs for the side we are in favour of…finally conclusion…. i want to know about the details of this rule in an ielts writing
In today’s modern society younger generation are motivated to take a year off from studies after completing high school and before starting university education. This approach may have several pros and cons in the personal and professional development of these individuals.
As you told 3rd topic of Business and money I wrote essay. I don’t think my essay will make you happy but at least I took first step. so what should I need to improve and what score should I get…..
with the development of information technology growing number of people are buying products online. Both the buyers and sellers reap the advantages of online business. On one hand a customers can get the required goods with ease and comfort while sitting home and on the other hand companies do not get into hustle of incurring costs on renting and managing their outlets.
Getting things easily does not necessarily mean that the consumer will always be happy. For instance, if the items received are broken or damaged then no one will accept responsibility. Usually the companies have policy that a dissatisfied customer needs to return the goods at his own expense and offices of companies are located at distant places where it is not possible for customer to visit in person and make a claim. Moreover sometimes the products displayed on website is given attractive look and in reality the stuff looks ordinary.
Rise of Cyber crimes is also an issue that many people desist from shopping online. Incidents of hacking the credit card numbers and fake companies on the internet also raised concern and fears in minds of public. Some organization do offer cash on delivery option which puts a buyer on a safer side but if the buyer is fake and order placed on internet was fake then company will suffer the loss.
Because most people use internet and advertisement on the internet is quite easy so it might be another reason for why companies prefer to sell online. while from customer’s point of view he can search and compare the product and its features in great detail on web rather than wasting time in markets, could be the other reason for online shopping. So there is always trade off between merits and demerits and risk that a person is willing to take that sets his mind to which option he chooses.
I will give you a tip – there are no questions in part 2. There are only some guidelines of what to include in the talk. It is your choice what information you put in and how much to add to your talk. If the prompts are -what -when -who -why, I would also add – how long – how often – where etc. You also need to add details and descriptions. You should never just stick to the prompts and answer them like questions. Anyway, let’s wait for your results. I’ll be hoping the results are not so bad and still ok for you purposes.
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In contrast, other people believe that keeping certain animals in captivity can save the animal from the cruel world it would have been forced to live otherwise.